You are everything: the purity and sanctity,
the illusion and surreality or super-reality,
a closed garden and an open oasis,
floating prayers above the desert of everyday
coming down like clouds of the night,
a healing voice around these ruins of mine.
You are every spring after the winters
and everything is the same but different
and time itself is an icon of eternity.
In a corner of reality there is a place for us
who dare not wake up since it's so good:
every dream that gently comes after the day.
Teisuka
¸.•´¸.•* ♫ Touching... Teisuka-san.... simply beautiful.... happy weekend my friend....
ReplyDeleteHello, Shawn-san! ( ^.^)ノ How are you, my friend? Thank you very much for your kind words and good feedback. I really appreciate it. This little poem is dedicated to my "valentine" or sweetheart. She is my only one, "the sweetest flower in the garden" that I know, and I wanted to write is ode to express how much she means to me... :) Have a wonderful weekend to you and your family, Shawn! Best wishes, Teisuka
DeleteVery tender and beautiful brother,...I hope she is touched by this :)
ReplyDeleteHi Glenn,
DeleteHow have you been? Thank you very much for your kind words, brother! Your comment made me really glad today, when I had a "helluva day" or a day of hardships... Yes, fortunately my sweetheart was touched by this. She said: "I see your latest poem as a very beautiful song of the heart, as a very beautiful the song of the soul. Thank you, honey."
That was a good feedback for me. To make her happy and feel that she is loved, it's my purpose and pleasure. :)
Have a wonderful week to you, brother. Hope all is well in your world. Be well and take good care of yourself!
Blessings from Finland,
Teisuka
hi Teisuka^^/
Deleteoops it seems i noticed one linguistic error. at least i saw one of the others which is always accompanied by my English. i mean is "as" i had to write "like", right? sorry for my bad english.
it's really beautiful poem, thank you once again
blessing from rainy Moscow
Nika
Hi Nikushka ^^/
DeleteДобрый вечер, мой ангел! How are you? Don't worry, your English is correct and everyone can understand your lovely comment and its meaning. I'm happy that you like my poem, dedicated to you. ^^ Aha, there is a rainy weather in Moscow? Also here in Western Finland! Fortunately, we both love the rain, too. Xa-xa. Good night, sweetie! Увидимся во сне... ^^/
Teisuka
Hi Teisuka,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your great poem. Very nice! You're really expressive, my friend! A true romantic? Haha...
May you always be embraced by love at such a comforting corner as you described in your poem. May you always feel peace and joy in your faith as well!
Hope everything has been going well for you! The summer is just around the corner, hope you will enjoy the season with lots of fun. (Even though it is not your favorite season.) I remember you used to swim a lot during the summer, so do you plan to do so again this summer?
Thanks again for the poem. May you enjoy the rest of the week and have a wonderful weekend!
Bao
Hi Bao,
DeleteThank you very much for your kind words and compliment, my friend! Your comment made me really glad. ^^ Yes, I'm an incurable romanticist and dreamer! Haha. I've been mostly okay lately. How about you?
Many thanks for your good wishes, Bao. For my part, I wish you a joyful summer, strong faith, good health, love and peace! Yes, summer is here and I still love swimming. For the past few days, weather has been really hot (even 29 °C or 80 °F) and I've been swimming in the chilly river. I like all the seasons. As the Bible says, "There is a time for everything, and a season for every activity under the heavens" (Ecclesiastes 3:1). :)
Happy summer to you, my dear friend, and once again: thank you for being here today!
Blessings,
Teisuka